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      my 1st oc: sharktank (challenge accepted)

      name: sharktank
      gender: stallion
      species: Pegasus
      age: around 1000 (whole space thing messes with age so... yeah)
      description: yellow and red mane flowing like RD's. red tail flowing like pinkie's. blue eyes. colorful wings of the shade of red. yellow body with red stomach.
      background: he had the boring life of flying around space and teleporting without magic and showing creatures more life forms exist. he uses hoof magic. he made friends easily considering he was different from the rest.
      cutie mark: gate of knowledge. he is super smart and can basically teleport using this invisible gate that is everywhere.
      use: anything aloud.
      other: nothing.

      UP2U
      if he is accepted
      You can't deny the rulers their junk!

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      Dear @Uglymod

      Thank you for your submission. Unfortunately there seems to be a few issues.

      Your character is far too old.

      Your character may be a bit too colorful and randomly colored. You may wish to change this.

      Your character have little to no described background, and what is described is against the settings of our RP, such as teleporting while a pegasus, using magic without being a unicorn in general, flying in space, and so on. Unfortunately none of this passes.

      The cutiemark is not appropriate and its abilities are far overpowered. This will need to be removed.

      In short, this character will not be accepted without a complete rework from the ground up, including history, age, powers, and so on. If you have any questions, feel free to ask.
      The Emperor Protects.

      Praised be the Omnissiah.

      Hydra Dominatus!

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      Ok, the colors are not random, but I guess he is a bit... Messed up in yur book.
      You can't deny the rulers their junk!

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