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    Thread: OC Dark Eclipse

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      OC Dark Eclipse

      Name: Dark Eclipse

      Gender: male

      species: unicorn

      approximate age: 18


      Some story: Dark Eclipse is a charter of mine plus he's fighting within himself so his combat form will not come out. Some times his combat form can be helpful at times of need but he only tap his magic to activate or deactivate the combat form. But the Dragon spirit named Drako can get a little irritated and only one sprk of dark magic can really irritate him.



      description: white coat and red and gray mane and tail the cutie mark is a Dragons silhouette and yellow Dragon like eyes but the normal form has a white coat as will and black and red mane and tail plus cutie mark is a son and moon having a eclipse.


      I hope I can RP with my OC!


      Cutie mark stroy: the stroy with the cutie mark he was pretty much blessed with it but the combat forms cutie mark was a curse but some say it's part of his destiny the mark of a Dragon lord is a path not taken lightly in the words of Dark star of the Dragon empire. He doesn't know why or how but he is proud of the honor and glary of a warrior.
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      If I need to change anything just till me!

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      I'm not a Mod but I'll tell you these things:
      * No "Dragon Spirits"
      * Alot more Detail
      I hate being a Grammar Nazi but * Correct Grammar
      * Dragon Empire?
      * You need a better layout (Check the OC format on the top of the page)
      Just trying to help you here.

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      Hey there @Dusk1181

      As Sketch said, there's a real dearth of detail here, I'd suggest looking at some of the accepted OCs to get a feel for the amount of information we'd like to see.

      In regard to the content, I don't see much of what you have here fitting into our RP. We tend to stick very close to the show's content and information, and what we really want to see is an OC that would make sense if they were in My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. If you're putting in information and back story that is massively different from anything we've ever seen in the show, chances are that it will not be allowed. If you want to check any ideas or stories with us before you write them into your character, feel free to send me a pm and I'll be happy to help.

      Thanks to Twilight for this sig!

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