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    Thread: uhm OC:Ezhno

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      uhm OC:Ezhno

      Name: Ezhno

      Gender: Male

      Species: Pegafox or Equivulpine

      Approximate age: Around 40-50

      Picture and/or Description: description in background.

      Background: Ezhno the pegasus pony of the desert. Traveling with a raven named Fern. Just a warning, he may not be insane, but he's very observant, as quick witted as a traveling merchant, and as calculating as any veteran soldier. Though never having fought in a war, he was and still is a courier during a changeling war in the desert. His family had died in a sandstorm. And due certain circumstances, he was captured sold into slavery and tested on. Splicing his DNA with that of a desert fox's, he's now a hybrid. A monstrosity in his clan, he was exiled and the circumstances of his exile include the binding of his wings via bandages. He covers his face with bandages as well to hide the consequences of the gene experiments. He looks more fox than pony, but still retains his back hooves. His front hooves after many painful nights have become paws. He's quiet usually, and enormously superstitious, he follows a prophecy that he rarely tells to anypony. Rumors had it that it was told to him at a young age from a kelpie in a desert oasis during his first night of slavery. He carries a staff with him and walks mostly on his hind hooves. Though he seems unapproachable at times, he's fine with company and often has interesting tales to tell of the desert and his travels.

      Personality: sadistic at times. Quiet and reserved for most. Calculating when it comes to others. And doesn't open up that often.

      Cutie Mark: his cutie mark is that of a Shepard's crook or staff he earned that during the war. Leading soldiers into battle even if he did not hold the commanding rank.

      Use: Forum RP

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      OC stuff: He can be quite roused by fighting and will join in if possible. He's normally secretive and with his paws and such wrapped up with bandages, he doesn't make much noise when walking. Once relaxed, he likes to play jokes on others. His bird Fern helps him at times and is quite intelligent. Comparable to that of a Phoenix.
      Last edited by GalenAnon; 08-01-2013 at 06:32 AM.
      Quite like me~

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      Before an RP mod will review this, they'll ask you to put it in this format: http://equestriaforever.com/showthre...ormat-Required

      Then they can help with whatever details need to be ironed out.

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      Thanks. I'll get that straightened out.
      Quite like me~

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      @GalenAnon
      Thank you for your submission! Now, while we are thankful that you wish to RP with us, there are a few things that would need to be changed for this character to be acceptable in our RP.

      First of all, your choice of race. Unfortunately we do not allow pegafoxes, nor do we allow DNA-splicing, combinations of pony and another animal, or generally the kind of change you have described for your character. This would unfortunately need to be removed for the character to be acceptable. We would suggest that you either pick a pegasus or, if you wish to take something less pony, a gryphon.
      We do not generally allow dead families, and certainly not when simply killed off in a random accident/natural disaster, it simply opens the door to Special Snowflake too much. We'd need you to change this as well.
      We do not accept slavery. There are neither any hints that slavery exists in MLP, nor does it fit the tone of the show and the world of Equestria. This would also need to be removed.
      Furthermore, like with the earlier topic, there are no hints that there exists any real, ongoing wars between changelings and ponies, nor does the idea of war fit very well into the tone of the show and the world of Equestria. As such this would need to be removed. Due to this he would also need a new cutiemark-story.
      Additionally, while the idea of Kelpies are interesting they do not exist in Equestria as far as we know, and because of this also they would need to be removed.

      To add to all of this, most RP takes place in Equestria, and generally in the area of Ponyville. As your character travels the deserts he would have little reason to appear in Ponyville, and even less reason to stay there.
      We'd also like a clarification to what you mean with sadistic? Does he behave similar to Gilda, or were you meaning on the level of breaking other's bones for the fun of it?

      In conclusion, while this character might be great for a fan-fic, we fear that you would need to change too much of the character for it to be acceptable to us, and would end up with a new character entirely. While we certainly would be happy to help you fit it in, it honestly would seem like a better choice to make a new character from scratch, as it would demand much less work from you.

      If you have any questions or wish to talk in detail on any part of this, feel free to message me and we can talk it out.
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      Closing thread as OP does not wish to continue on the character at this time.
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