OC: Straight Jacket

[Psycho]

Name: Straight Jacket.
Former name: Sly Fathoms

Gender: Male

Species: Earth Pony

Approximate age: 46

Picture:

Spoiler: Straight Jacket 3.0 

Background: Long story short: A once very skilled freelancer agent capable of almost every form of challenge. His employer sought out a rare gas founded by a team of other fellow agents. This employer tricked Sly into thinking this equipment would help his physical side thus making him more of an effective and efficient worker. The gas didnt perform as planed and he developed a advanced type of MPD and complete memory loss.

Personality: These personality call themselves 'Personality fragments' or Fragments for short. They each represent a different emotion/function.

Spoiler: Psycho 

The main fragment and seen as the most former of the group and pften refered to as the host. Psycho has the most control; being able to call out whatever fragment(s) he wishes, though he's not exactly the brightest. Psycho represent joy and optimism and speaks in a higher tone when he's happy or excited but his 'serious' tone can be confused with a jokingly serious sound. Psycho can can be taken as the youngest most colt like fragment.

Spoiler: Loco 

Apathy. Bitter and self centered, Loco has a love for food and sleep though he does show interest with things he thinks are worth "all the effort" or self entertainment. Loco is quick to make a sarcastic comment even at things that he'll be quick to regret. He has a knack for finding any way to get out of doing a job, he often tricks Psycho into doing it for him

Spoiler: Crazy 

Rage. Crazy is a typical villain with typical villain dreams and goals, though he's all bark and no bite. Crazy speaks with a slight British accent and has an unhealthy tendency of making threats (silly) and seeing everything in a negative light. He is known for his overuse of 'evil' words and a maniacal loud laughter

Spoiler: Biz (Bizarre) 

is the organization of the family. He shows high liking to physical labour and simply getting stuff done. He is easily the oldest (mentally) of the fragments as depicted in his verbiage and general beliefs. Biz speaks in a gruff and commanding voice and has a comedic hate-hate relationship with Loco as Biz seeks to give Loco the dangerous jobs as he is worth any risk. Biz cant seem to comprehend the fact that if Loco were to 'die' so would he.

Spoiler: Tic (Lunatic) 

Tic can easily be confused as a hate fragment though he is in fact Deceit. Always trying to find ways to fooling any 'Air Breather' he can. Tic seems to be the only one capable of accurately imitating the other Fragments' voices, mannerisms and and overall personality

Spoiler: Mental 

The dark side of Psycho's mind. Mental is Hate and Fear. He almost never talks and rather uses grunts, growls and groans as a form of communication. While Mental may be the 'fighter' of the pack, he isnt exactly hostile though he is extremely defensive and short tempered. Some fragments use Mental as a defensive means and try to stay on whatever good side he may have

Spoiler: D (Demented) 

Easily the most intelligent fragment. D is logic and constantly working even though he may not be present. He is obligated to assist any who Psycho would call friend. D speaks in monotone voice. Its also interesting to note that D is the only fragment who cant just 'appear. He must be requested by anther pony or another fragment.

Spoiler: Recollection 

Recol' is the only 'fragment' who is awake when SJ's mask is removed. Recollection only remembers fuzzy memories of his past and is the closet personality to Sly Fathoms. Psycho and Co. have no connection with Recollection and vice versa therefore Recollection could be the holder of any long term memory. No fragment likes to have his/their mask removed as it is a equal of blacking out.

Cutie Mark: His entire life, Sly Fathoms was a blank flank. That was until the day the mask was donned on him. He was meant to be a broken soul and holder of multiple personalties. No-one can claim they know why exactly.

Use: Shout box. And maybe Forum.

Other: NOTES:
White Eye: Biz's speciality allows Psycho (And Biz himself) to have every fragment out at once though at the cost of serious mental drain.
Red Eye: Mental's speciality. Basically adrenaline and strength enhancement for a short time.

Only 3 fragments can be present at once (unless White Eye). A random 'head twitch' indicates the fragment(s) switching randomly. One minute it could be Psycho, Loco and Crazy. The next minutes could be Biz, Loco and Tic.

Unfortunately some emotions didnt make the cut, this however, does not mean they cant be created by showing Psycho acts of this emotion.
Keep in mind that some didnt make it for reasons that might be deep inside his maze of a mind.

[Applejack]

My apologies, but I am going to have to deny this without question. In short, because it is breaking a variety of RP rules. Namely:

1 - No grimdark OCs
2 - It's a special snowflake
3 - It would never appear on MLP, and thus doesn't fit into it's canon.

For further questions, you can PM. Otherwise, look at a few accepted OCs to get an idea of what is accepted with your next submit. Have a good day.

[Rosie]

Oh well sorry about that I thought it was pritty cool I mean the background and all

[Psycho]

Well thats wicked lame. Really really wicked lame. Guess I wont be RPing here at all.

Maybe his background is a little grindmark but honestly, SJ here is comic relief. And whats this 'snowflake' business? Sounds like a limiting of creativity to me.

Ok after reading this 'Snowflake' thing I'd like to voice some opinions if that's fair. Which should be fair.

[Rarity#1]

Sorry to hear that Psycho.

We do try to keep really close to MLP canon when reviewing OCs. We realize that that turns off some people from RPing here, but it's how we've decided to run the RP here. I know that you have some OCs who aren't Freelancers (Harvest Revelry and Chime come to mind. Yes, I pay that much attention to your threads elsewhere, I love your art.) that we could probably adapt to fit into the RP here, if you'd like to discuss anything like that with me, feel free to drop me a PM.

[Rainbow Dash]

Well thats wicked lame. Really really wicked lame. Guess I wont be RPing here at all.

Maybe his background is a little grindmark but honestly, SJ here is comic relief. And whats this 'snowflake' business? Sounds like a limiting of creativity to me.

I don't want to seem mean but AJ has these rules here for a reason, and i actually think abiding to restrictions takes more creativity than if you could just go full brainstorm when creating an OC.

Creating a character that runs by the restrictions of the show, also maintains a certain, "flesh" to the RP. If you had complete freedom you wouldn't recognize it as MLP at all.

[Psycho]

Which is a matter of opinion.

[Rainbow Dash]

Which is a matter of opinion.

As I stated.

Nice Avatar might I add.

[Rosie]

It is a nice one maybe you could make a spy like Pinkie bressed up as or an agent like Con Mane you know but you know its your's not mine just some ideas

[Macaneitor]

SJ is more to have fun and his background doesn't really show to this character, hilarious to RP with btw