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    Thread: OC: Cloud Shock

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      OC: Cloud Shock

      Name: Cloud Shock.

      Gender: Female.

      Species: Pegasus.

      Approximate age: (In human years): 18.

      Picture and/or Description: CloudShock1.jpg

      Background: Cloud Shock grew up in Cloudsdale. She lived with her mother and had no siblings. Her father wasn't around in her life much, always working or travelling for business. Cloud Shock loves her mother and appreciates all she did for her. Cloud Shock attended a local school when she was a filly. Cloud Shock despised the bullies in her school and stood up for the bullied ponies, doing all she could to stop the harm. She likes speed and wishes to fly fast, for she is a slow flyer. Cloud Shock is a great Wonderbolts fan. Cloud Shock helps out in the weather factory, producing clouds. She also has a part-time job at Mimi's Cupcakes in Ponyville and is one of the pegasi in charge of clearing the clouds there. In Mimi's Cupcakes, she is a waitress and bakes the banana cupcakes, leaving the rest of the baking to her partner Lieve. Currently, she owns a small apartment in Ponyville. Cloud Shock wishes to travel more, to the big cities like Manehattan and Canterlot to see the Wonderbolts. Cloud Shock loves sleeping in clouds and she also likes animals and takes care of them whenever she can.

      Personality: Cloud Shock doesn't lie and is really straightforward, she usually speaks before she thinks. She is a little rude and is full of confidence. Sometimes her mouth goes at a faster speed then her mind, therefore leaving her wondering what she just said. Cloud Shock loves having friends and will go out of her way to please somepony. Cloud Shock treats strangers as friends, unless they are of royalty. Cloud Shock hates bullies and will willingly go into a fight to prevent somepony from being bullied. She is over-protective of little fillies and colts she knows well, like Ms.Mimi's little filly. Cloud Shock has high self-esteem and thinks she is great and powerful. She may be annoying at times, but will always try to make ponies happy and she'll try to give advice in bad situations, though it might not be the best. Cloud Shock is a bit careless with her work, but she isn't a lazy pony, even if she does enjoy sleep.

      Cutie Mark: (Be sure to include what their talent is and how it relates to the image that their Mark is. As well, how they learned what their talent is.)
      Cloud Shock's cutie mark is a fluffy cloud with a glowy transparent swirl around it. Cloud Shock's special talent is cloud-making, she makes the best clouds for rainy season. Cloud Shock got her cutie mark when she was 12 and since then her work at the weather factory has been making clouds. Before that she was a worker in the rainbow part of the factory and always messed up the color order and mix, making it taste sweet instead of sour. Afterwards she helped out with the snowflake making, and she was mediocre at the job. She got her cutie mark during rainy season, a few weeks after her birthday, when a cloud-maker was sick and missed the day. Cloud Shock filled in for the old mare, her mother's friend, and realized she was good at it after getting her cutie mark. There have also been rumors that her clouds are great to use as beds.

      Use: (Specify forum RP, shoutbox RP, or both) Both.

      Other: (Optional section, add anything else you feel important!) She is a little smaller than normal ponies, and flies at a much slower speed.
      Last edited by Nopak; 01-17-2014 at 06:21 PM.

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      Hey there @Nopak

      Sorry for the delay in getting back to you.

      Everything here looks good except for one thing: the dead parent. Unfortunately, history has shown us that allowing dead parents rarely adds anything to a character except to give them an 'out' for making others feel sympathetic for/focus attention on them. While it's conceivable that a character with a dead parent could be played completely appropriately (indeed, I'm pretty sure they could be done very well), we would prefer to avoid trying to judge that. As a result, we have decided to request all dead parents in characters' backgrounds be brought back to life even if they are to be fairly absent in that character's life.

      Feel free to let me know if you have any questions.

      Thanks to Twilight for this sig!

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      Quote Originally Posted by Rarity View Post
      Hey there @Nopak

      Sorry for the delay in getting back to you.

      Everything here looks good except for one thing: the dead parent. Unfortunately, history has shown us that allowing dead parents rarely adds anything to a character except to give them an 'out' for making others feel sympathetic for/focus attention on them. While it's conceivable that a character with a dead parent could be played completely appropriately (indeed, I'm pretty sure they could be done very well), we would prefer to avoid trying to judge that. As a result, we have decided to request all dead parents in characters' backgrounds be brought back to life even if they are to be fairly absent in that character's life.

      Feel free to let me know if you have any questions.
      Hey!
      I edited it so her father was just absent from her life and working a lot. Is it alright now?

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      Yep, that looks just fine, feel free to use Cloud Shock in the RP!

      Thanks to Twilight for this sig!

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      Quote Originally Posted by Rarity View Post
      Yep, that looks just fine, feel free to use Cloud Shock in the RP!
      Thank you very much!

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