Music Burst

[Granny Smith]

Name: Music Burst

Gender: Female

Species: Unicorn

Approximate age: (In human years): 18

Picture and/or Description: Looks: Attachment 3897

Background: As a little girl, she was very shy. She never spoke much, and that is how people never knew her voice was amazing. She would sit around, watching the others play while she read a book. Her family was the only thing she lived for. And to that family, she gives all of her love. Music Burst says she will never be able to move out of their home-she even pays half the bills with her earnings! Often, her songs are also about her loving family.

Personality: Music is a shy pony. She doesn't talk much, unless if she is talked to first. She is sweet once you get to know her, and she is very loyal. Her feelings do get hurt easily though, so be careful.She does have a lot of stage fright though. She just remembers all the good things singing has brought to her and the words pour out!


Cutie Mark: (Be sure to include what their talent is and how it relates to the image that their Mark is. As well, how they learned what their talent is.): Music Heart's cutie mark is a microphone-she is an amazing singer. When she was 8, her parents entered her in a talent show so that she wouldn't be afraid to speak anymore. This worked-she started using her voice, and singing to communicate to the world. She loves to sing in her free time and writes her own music. She is often very poetic, as she likes to say things like they were lyrics to a song.

Use: (Specify forum RP, shoutbox RP, or both): Both

Other: (Optional section, add anything else you feel important!) : None

[Twilight Sparkle]

Not bad, but expand!

Typically you would expect shyness to reflect itself in stage fright, what makes singing different than just talking to ponies for her? Tell us about her talent, what she does with it, and how it involves her day-to-day life. There's a good ten years of space to talk about there, and nothing showing for it!

Additionally, how is she with the "family she lived for" now? Where is she living? Is she using her singing talent for work, or does she do something else?

[Granny Smith]

Thanks!

Personality-She does have a lot of stage fright though. She just remembers all the good things singing has brought to her and the words pour out!

Background. And to that family, she gives all of her love. Music Burst says she will never be able to move out of their home-she even pays half the bills with her earnings! Often, her songs are also about her loving family.

[Twilight Sparkle]

Thanks!

Personality-She does have a lot of stage fright though. She just remembers all the good things singing has brought to her and the words pour out!

Background. And to that family, she gives all of her love. Music Burst says she will never be able to move out of their home-she even pays half the bills with her earnings! Often, her songs are also about her loving family.

Please edit updates into the original post.

Also, I'd suggest you show us instead of tell us... serves to make things much more immersive!

[Granny Smith]

alright! and twilight, what do you mean show you?

[Granny Smith]

@twilightsparkle ? u here?
@Twilight Sparkle Sorry

[Twilight Sparkle]

@twilightsparkle ? u here?
@Twilight Sparkle Sorry

Whoops, sorry I missed that.

Anyway, what I'd meant was to make personality traits clear through storytelling, as opposed to directly referencing them.

Still looking for these: "how is she with the "family she lived for" now? Where is she living? Is she using her singing talent for work, or does she do something else?"

[Granny Smith]

Personality: Music is a shy pony. In class, she won' talk to anyone but her best friend. She doesn't talk much, unless if she is talked to first, usually by a teacher. She is sweet once you get to know her, and she is very loyal. One time, her friend was out and almost fell off a cliff-she had to come out and save her, and this has pulled up her status. Her feelings do get hurt easily though, so be careful. She does have a lot of stage fright! When Twilight asked her to sing one time at the Gala, she stood there, then ran off stage! She just remembers all the good things singing has brought to her and the words pour out!

Music Burst is living with her parents-she has given her money and life to them, and they have given theirs. In equestria, the house stands towering over the others, since she gets paids lots and LOTS for singing-she has spent the money on her parents new house.
@Twilight Sparkle UPDATED! Sorry it took...months

[Twilight Sparkle]

@Granny Smith

Remove the reference to Twilight, mention that the parent's house is in Ponyville, and add the above post's information into the OP, and you should be good to go!

[Granny Smith]

Name: Music Burst

Gender: Female

Species: Unicorn

Approximate age: (In human years): 18

Picture and/or Description: Looks: Attachment 3897

Personality: Music is a shy pony. In class, she won' talk to anyone but her best friend. She doesn't talk much, unless if she is talked to first, usually by a teacher. She is sweet once you get to know her, and she is very loyal. One time, her friend was out and almost fell off a cliff-she had to come out and save her, and this has pulled up her status. Her feelings do get hurt easily though, so be careful. She does have a lot of stage fright! When her friend asked her to sing one time at the Gala, she stood there, then ran off stage! She just remembers all the good things singing has brought to her and the words pour out!

Music Burst is living with her parents-she has given her money and life to them, and they have given theirs. In equestria, the house stands towering over the others, since she gets paids lots and LOTS for singing-she has spent the money on her parents new house in Ponyville.

Cutie Mark: (Be sure to include what their talent is and how it relates to the image that their Mark is. As well, how they learned what their talent is.): Music Heart's cutie mark is a microphone-she is an amazing singer. When she was 8, her parents entered her in a talent show so that she wouldn't be afraid to speak anymore. This worked-she started using her voice, and singing to communicate to the world. She loves to sing in her free time and writes her own music. She is often very poetic, as she likes to say things like they were lyrics to a song.

Use: (Specify forum RP, shoutbox RP, or both): Both

Other: (Optional section, add anything else you feel important!) : None