Name-Blood Wing
Race-Pegasus
Gender-Make
Age-14
Coat-Black
Mane-Crimson Red with Black streaks
Eyes-Crimson Red
Story-Blood Wing lost his parents to a murderer and has spread blood to find the man and exact revenge
Cutie Mark-Winged Blade
Weapon-Black and Crimson Red Blade
Post Thanks / Like - 0 Honors, 0 Thanks, 0 Likes, 2 Lols, 0 WTFs, 0 Oh, that's nice
I may not be a RP mod but I'll give you a heads up you most likely will have to redo your submission, You will need more of a back story, and the murder thing doesn't really fit in with RP, nor do weapons. There is a submission guideline post that I do not have on me but is easily findable in the forums. I hope this helps you even a little bit.
Be sure to keep your skates sharp and your skills sharper.
Vive ut vivas
Live that you may live forever
Yeahhhhhh, dis ain't gonna work.
Try reading some other people's OC submissions, it'll help
Hey there, @hirashiXuchiha
As the other two have already alluded to, your OC submission is basically wholly unacceptable. I'd advise you to take a look at the RP Rules and make sure that you use the OC Submission Format. If you have any questions, feel free to let me know.
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