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    Thread: CC Spitfire

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      CC Spitfire

      Name: Spitfire

      Gender: Female

      Species: Pegasus

      Approximate age: 22-28

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      Spoiler: Seen here in her Wonderbolt suit when performing for a show, or making a celebrity appearance. 


      Spoiler: Seen at the academy in her formal veterans training outfit. 


      Spoiler: What she normally looks like when off duty. 


      Background: Spitfire’s story begins where most pegasi’s do, at Summer Flight Camp. This is where she and her three friends, Soarin, Fleetfoot, and Rapidfire, as well as her twin sister Blaze, all began to climb to their goal: to become Wonderbolts! It was almost every pegasi’s dream to become a Wonderbolt, they were known to be the biggest celebrities for their fast and precise flying acrobatic stunts. Spitfire was determined to improve her abilities, though she wasn’t the best flyer as first. The obstacle courses were not her strong suit as it proved to be difficult for her to pass any of the tests. She worked hard to try and improve her flight skills and she was mostly a 'lone wolf’ as she did her training all on her own. One day a young colt by the name of Soarin was watching her practice and always saw that she failed at every obstacle, he approached Spitfire one day when she was practicing. He waited til she crashed into the cloud floor to help her out and help her to improve on her flying as he reminded her that she wasn't alone.

      Spitfire didn’t really feel accepting of his help at first, but when Blaze spoke up as she was also watching, Spitfire felt that she was missing the big picture about the Wonderbolts, they worked individually, but they also together as a team. They recruited two more pegasus who had the same aspiration, Rapidfire and Fleetfoot, to all train together and possibly become the Wonderbolts they all so desired to be. They all had to do their own individual training so they could see where they needed improvement. Spitfire was the most determined to get it all right the first time, though it was impossible she did all she could to overcome those obstacles. Over the time She spent at Summer Flight Camp, she had made these friends, improved her flying skills to be near flawless, and she and her friends were all at the top of the whole class. Spitfire had greatly improved overall, she was the fastest flyer of everypony and her precision was close to perfect. She had set time breaking records for the obstacle courses, even the rings which were her biggest fluke she had conquered. She was determined to make her dream, every pegasus pony’s dream, become her reality.

      When Summer Flight Camp came to an end, Spitfire and her friends all came together to share their final goodbyes. But little did they know they were being watched the whole time as the current Wonderbolts of that time swooped in on the unsuspecting group. The leader, Firefly, approaching Spitfire, lifted up her goggles and smiled at her. “Hello Spitfire, we’ve been watching you since you got here, all of you. And...” Firefly removed her goggles and her flight suit and held them out to Spitfire. “I think you’re ready to take on our roles, as the new Wonderbolts, captain.” Spitfire’s jaw dropped as did her friends, she was completely speechless that she was having her one dream become a reality. She took the gear and suited up, adding the goggles as the final touch, she and her friends were now the new team of Wonderbolts. The retired Wonderbolts flew off, leaving the new Wonderbolts to their task. Spitfire turned to the others with a confident grin. “Ok, better get some sleep because drills start bright and early at the Cloudium!”

      After her years of building up her team and expanding the Wonderbolts with a few more additions to the group, she got around quite a bit as a celebrity. She was a judge at the Best Young Flyer Competition which she was fond of to see young pegasi show their flying prowess and aspiration to be a Wonderbolt themselves. Watching the last performance, a pony with elegant wings by the name of Rarity was performing with Rainbow Dash and the two were doing quite well up until Rarity's wings disintegrated. Spitfire and tow other Wonderbolts sprang into action to save Rarity from free fall, but her flailing around knocked her and the others out sending them all into free fall until saved at the last second by Rainbow Dash's Sonic Rainboom. After the competition spitfire thanked Rainbow Dash for the save and she was crowned the winner.

      A bit later she attended the upcoming Grand Galloping Gala, which she encountered the young flyer Rainbow Dash again, this time saving Soarin's apple pie. Spitfire invited her to hang out with them at the Gala and Rainbow accepted, and while she tried to impress Spitfire and the others, they kept getting pulled away by other ponies. She also supervised the lifting of the water to Cloudsdale's weather factory where again she met Rainbow Dash being the confident leader of all the pegasus ponies to keep going and they eventually lot the minimum wind power, stunning Spitfire impressed. She complimented Rainbow for having the guts to keep going and pull it off.

      Spitfire's next feat was training the rookies at the Wonderbolt Academy where she was the drill sergeant for a small group of ponies including two promising candidates, Rainbow Dash and Lightning Dust who were the two that took on the challenges with ease. She was strict yet slightly impressed with their flying abilities, yet when Rainbow Dash cleared Spitfire's mind about Lighting's reckless flying stunts which she got her facts straight and stripped Lighting of her lead pony badge and dismissed her from the academy.

      Personality: Spitfire is laid back and quite easy to get along with. While she does enjoy the fandom of her celebrity lifestyle, she does like to get away from the heavy work load that comes with it. She does enjoy her job as the Wonderbolt captain as well as being the Wonderbolt Academy trainer where she’s tough as nails, because when it gets down to business, she changes completely. But outside the Wonderbolts, she’s there for the fans, the one that she knows by heart being Rainbow Dash, who she met a bit more personally at the Gala.

      Cutie Mark:


      Spitfire's cutie mark is what looks to be a blazing wing. ( That's what it looks like to me )

      Spitfire had earned her CM through Flight Camp, it happened during the final test of the semester. It was the most advance course yet, it was close to Wonderbolt level. Spitfire was nervous she wouldn't pass it, as she wanted to turn and leave but Soarin was right behind her, as well as her sister Blaze and the others, they all smiled at her with confidence knowing that she was the best flyer out of their group. She smiled back, her eyes sparkling with fiery confidence as Soarin shoved her to the front of the line as it was her turn. Spitfire took her place then rocketed off from the start, taking the turns ever so swiftly, the rest of the ponies watched her in awe, she looked like she was on fire she was so fast. She finished in record time and stood tall, she gave quite a show that they all stared at her, which made her confused. "Why are you all looking at me like that?" Spitfire looked herself over for any sign of injury or something she missed, then went wide eyed as she say hew brand new cutie mark.
      Last edited by Spitfire; 02-03-2013 at 02:02 AM.

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      Hey there @Ferrarity

      This is a pretty good start, but it read a bit like you rushed through writing it, try going back and fixing up the writing and grammar a bit

      In addition, you leave off with her story after she became a Wonderbolt, but we've seen her several times in the show itself, try adding a bit so that you're caught up with the present.

      Thanks to Twilight for this sig!

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      Ok @Rarity, see if that works

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      Quote Originally Posted by Ferrarity View Post
      Ok @Rarity, see if that works
      I like the additional information, and, while I hate to do this, I'm going to have to ask you to recheck your writing and grammar a bit. Some of the wordings are a bit hard to understand at first pass.

      Thanks to Twilight for this sig!

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      Quote Originally Posted by Rarity View Post
      I like the additional information, and, while I hate to do this, I'm going to have to ask you to recheck your writing and grammar a bit. Some of the wordings are a bit hard to understand at first pass.
      Mkay went through it and make corrections, let me know how it is

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      I'll go ahead and accept this now, have fun!

      Thanks to Twilight for this sig!

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