WHAT aww pffff t nooo....okoh well
May I ask why the eye has to go and can they be two different colors
WHAT aww pffff t nooo....ok
May I ask why the eye has to go and can they be two different colors
Last edited by Rosie; 03-07-2013 at 12:23 AM.
Changed my mind. You can leave it. Essentially, your biggest issue at this point is dealing with your grammar and phrasing. Any luck on that?
Well I've been RPing with some friends, and I have to say it's getting a lot better
Well that that's what they say
That's good to hear! As the saying goes, "practice makes perfect." As for EqF, unfortunately I don't think I can allow you in at this time. You are close. Veeeeeery close. But not close enough I am afraid.Originally Posted by Rosie
Personally, I would recommend the biggest thing that would help you to improve would be to RP on your computer instead of your Andriod for starters. I would keep RPing with your friends as well (where is that by the way?). Who knows, with a bit more practice I can let you in. You OC is pretty much good to go. It's just a matter of improving your writing skills, you know?
Well I text on my phone, and i use gmail to RP, and as for the using my computer, my parents don't really approve of me being Brony and we have no internet, soooooo I kinda can't
Bummer. :/ That would be your best bet to improve.Well I text on my phone, and i use gmail to RP, and as for the using my computer, my parents don't really approve of me being Brony and we have no internet, soooooo I kinda can't
I can get online threw my phone though if that counts for anything
And I wanted to wait till I got approved before I did this but do you think its to early to make an ask Rosie thread?
Last edited by Rosie; 03-22-2013 at 02:32 PM.
You don't need to be approved to RP to have a IC ask me thread, I believe. So you should be okay in that sense.
And it does count for a few things, but the word choice is still a little off though.
*SQUEE* YAY, thank you so much
is there anything else I need to fix
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