Batflight

[batflight]

Name:Batflight

Gender:female

Species: pegasus

Approximate age: 8

Picture and/or Description:she had a black and red mane and tail she is mostly dark purple and has light blue eyes

Background:when she was younger she had a tough life her dad was never able to keep a job and her mom was always getting sick she only had one friend her twin sister Moonshine. One winter when they were six their mother died because of pneumonia they spent a few weeks with their father but some people from an orphanage took them away now they are in separate orphanages batflight is in ponyville moonshine is in Manehattan

Personality:she is a tomboy and always looking for adventure and has plenty of energy

Cutie Mark: she is a blank flank

Use: forum RP and shoutbox RP

Other:

[Seventeen]

Needs more detail in almost every place. Good Start Though!

[batflight]

i'll work on it but it's hard to think since there is a cat in my jacket (literally)

[Applejack]

Okay, going to need to see a lot more on this. Around at least two hundred and fifty words for the background, personality and the cutie mark story. Furthermore, you're going to need to tone down the level of unfortunate events that fell upon your OC. Though it's interesting to see tragedy mixed into a cartoon character, the RP on this forum tries to strive for all OCs to have backgrounds that would seem feasible for the show’s canon. Ergo, going to need to change having their mother die and being sent off to the orphanage.

If you need any help, please feel free to ask me or any of the other RP Mods (we're the ones with Pink usernames). I'll check back in later after you revised your submission. Good luck!