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      OC submission :D

      Thank you for taking the time to read this. I have roleplayed and ran several games before and i love it. never been really good at writing back stories though, it always been a problem ive had and im trying to get better at it. I hope this works for you and let me know if there are any changes that need to be made. Thank you for the opportunity to join this rp and i hope i will get to bring my style of play to you guys soon





      Name: Anaxunamun Stormcrow

      Gender: Female

      Species: pegasus

      Approximate age: 23

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      Background: She was born into a small family in canterlot who didnt have very much to their name, but they valued hard work and helping others. Growing up she was taught by her parents and her school teacher that it is always nice to put others before yourself, well to Anaxunamun that was more than just a lesson or a value, to her that was everything if she could make her loved ones and the others around her happy she was happy. While still being little she didnt have much permission do things and help the way she wanted to because she was to little, but she compromised with that by helping her little sister Alyxandria through school and tough times she had. She had two friends that felt the same way she did Jamie and Trane were their names, together the three of them decided to stick together and be as best help they could to there fellow ponies in canterlot.

      After the years went by Jamie had to leave Canterlot for reason Anax didnt know, this made her even more determined to help her fellow ponies. Trane helped her with this want to help feeling Anax had deep inside. Since she was much older now she took on more responsibilities to help her fellow people, she and her family had a delivery service that ran from canterlot to poneyville, Anax decided to be one of the escort on the route to ensure safety. With that idea in mind she decided she needed to be strong and determined she was. She and Trane began to practice and train in ways they thought would help them become stronger.

      Now after sometime has passed she is 23 and runs the business that her family once had, but she lets her sister run the place while she is gone to escort deliveries. Among one of the routes to ponyville she noticed that the town was struggling with help and to her seemed like they could use assistance. Now came a very hard decision for her, she couldnt decide whether or not to help the town or remain in her safe home with her dear friend and sister. A couple weeks past and she thought it over and decided to move to ponyville to help out the town and do the best she could to make it better in her eyes.

      She made the move to ponyville and began helping with all she could at anytime she could, but little to her knowledge this was bigger than she knew. After word of her kindness to other spread she began receiving requests of help from alot of different sources. She did the best she could to help with the apple farm, the bakery, and the different odds and ends she agreed to help with. She began to run herself ragged helping all the ponies and she was very tired all the time. Instead of letting this get her down she decided that there must be a better way to help. She thought long and hard, but finally the thought hit her!

      She then started writing and formulating a way to help all of ponyville with there lack of assistance in so many areas. She began to visit as many ponies as she could and asked them several questions and asked them to help in other areas of the town when they had the chance. It was a bit rocky at first but then she finally got the ok from alot of ponies and finally was able to put together an organized plan that had all the ponies helping each other even more than ever! This made her happy that she could help such a wonderful little town. She walked by all the different stores and locations that she had once tried to help herself and saw that everything was going great. All was going great, but she had an even better idea rather than just organizing, she herself wanted to do help again. Thats what she did, With a sigh of relief she felt great knowing that she was still getting her hooves dirty and and helped organize the town for a better future.

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      Personality: She is a brave, strong and helpful individual. She gets along with just about anyone and people seem to warm up to her quickly too. She is quite happy and uppity all the time especially in the presence of friends. She loves her town and loves helping anyway she can. Most importantly she cares about her fellow ponies!

      Cutie Mark: Her cutie mark is a silver heart plain and simple. The story goes like this, She was helping escort one of the deliveries to ponyville when one of her fellow colts injured one of his legs. She then had him sit in the back of the wagon then she herself towed the wagon with her injured friend along the way there. When they arrived and he could rest, he turned and said thank you to her, but this thank you was different this thank you seemed like it was not only from him but from everyone that she ever helped, this struck her in a way that she had never felt before. She was used to being thanked for her good deeds but this time was different. then before she realized it was there one of the ponies pointed out her cutie mark to her. She turned and saw it happiness and rejoice.

      She knew what the mark meant and can confidently reply to anyone that asks that this mark was for always helping others and being selfless. She uses the mark of confidence to make it through the tough times for her and ponyville, it reminds her that no matter what there is always a way to help and make things better, but most of all it symbolizes her and what her family stood for and for that she is proud

      Optional: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vQVeaIHWWck

      I want to use this for both forum and shout box rp
      Last edited by Anaxunamun; 08-17-2012 at 06:29 PM. Reason: To brighten up my backstory just a bit.

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      She's Cute Though, So It's Alright
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      This looks pretty good, however the lapses into depression are nearing a place that doesn't fit into the MLP universe where our RP takes place. Keep in mind that this is a show-canon environment, and Equestria tends to be overly cheery! But what you have is not terrible, simply toning it down slightly will do the trick just fine!

      Other than that, I'd just like to see a description of what it was she was trying to help with in Ponyville. Edit back with your updates!

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      Ok im done editing twilight i hope this is better.




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      I, for one, like this character a lot now Should be fun to meet Trixie in RP

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      Well trixie thank you I look forward to it




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      She's Cute Though, So It's Alright
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      This looks great!

      Accepted, welcome to the RP.

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