Originally Posted by Twilight Sparkle You state a few different temperatures to which he can supposedly lower the area around him to, please specify just one. Take a look at this again, there's still two different temperatures specified. Read your own writing thoroughly. It's still quite short and bare... it would be nice to see you write in a story or two.
@Twilight Sparkle , Deepest appologies for that! i shoulda read through it quite a bit more! edits are posted.
Thank you! This is acceptable enough, welcome to the RP.
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