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      OC-Sketch Quilliwing

      3Gender-Stallion
      Age-20
      Species-Pegasaus

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      Cutie Mark-Pencil to symbolize drawing ability.

      Cutie Mark Aquirement- The day Sketch was born he always would draw ,no matter what time,what day. As he grew older he became more interested in the arts and became much better at sketching. Through the years,his talent of drawing has improves dramatically from the help of ponies met through his life.
      Age aquired: 9 years old

      Physical Quailites- Longer, thinner, patterned feathers
      Personality Quailities- Strangers-Generally shy and quiet. Doesn't give much information or likes/dislikes. Friends-Very talkitive,friendly,shy or emotional depending on felling.

      Use: Both

      Story:
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      Ever since Sketch was little he loved to draw,all day,every day. His parents noticed his artistic ability, through the years as Sketch taught himself art. Eventually,at age 6, Sketch was sent to the Cloudsdale Colt and Filly Art Camp. Here he met Mr.Leadhoof,who taught him the basics of drawing, through that year Sketch discovered the wonders of exploring. This exploring lead him drawing things he saw in the world. At the end of the year, Sketch wanted to explore more of Equestria,which lead to his parents taking him on Archeaological Tour Sites. One day after a Tour of an ancient pillar near the desert, Sketch discovered a book in the store of the Tour Site. Picking up the book Sketch could make out the words"Acheaology and You"This furthered Sketch's interests which spanned out towards Archeaology.



      Through that year, Sketch discovered more books covering subjects of Ruins, Archeaology, and temples. A particulaur temple stated in the book: The Spirit Temple of Kuta'Mot. In the middle of the year, his parents decided he should go to Canterlot Filly and Colt's Archeaology Center and study archeaology and fossils there. At the camp, he met many nice colts and fillies and quickly became friends.Particulaurly with Berry Fritter who stood through Sketch through thick and think and reminded Sketch that anything he strived for was possible. This friend inspired him and he soon passed the final History test with flying colors, along with Berry Fritter.


      However, Sketch had now received a sad event in his life as his Best Friend had to move to Fillydelphia. While saddened, Sketch had brought many good memories to keep in his heart until they next met. On his 8th birthday, Sketch was reunited with Berry Fritter who moved to the house next to Sketch's. Eventually,Sketch and Berry had now become interested in eachother's work. Reading up archeaology, studying The Temple of Kuta'Mot, and writing reports together. However, it was now Sketch's time to move to Ponyville.

      Arriving at the end of November, they finally set root in Ponyville. At a certain point in December, Sketch's mother moved to Canterlot to take a fashion career job, leaving Sketch with only his father. A few month's later, nearing Sketch's 9th birthday Sketch was sent to the Ponyville Young Artist Institute,where he met Mrs.Inkmane, a cheery, older artist who taught Sketch many ways of drawing and sketching. On the day of his birthday, Berry Fritter sent a letter to Sketch wishing a Happy Birthday. At the end of the letter, a hoof-drawn picture could be seen.

      Cutie Mark Aquirement
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      This touched Sketch so he dared to do something. He decided to mail her a drawing too.
      Sketch spent hours in his room as he had asked to be left alone that day, inside Sketch was drawing to his best ability. For hours that day, he lined, shaded, and colored the picture in every-which way you can think of. This was Sketch's biggest project, and he was determined to finish it. And then,after hours of hard work he finished it. And there it was in all it's majesty. All of a sudden Sketch heard a loud *Flash* noise that stunned him for a bit, but when looking at his flank he saw his cutie mark shining before his eyes.
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      After this very little major things happened for a few years. However,at age 17 he went to Ponyville High College where he decided to focus on art and archealogy.
      At the College he met an Archealogist Proffesor named Digg, who supported art and taught Archeaology. Through these 3 years Sketch took a great deal of training to learn to become a good Archeaologist. During the training and surveying Sketch and Digg would constantly chat about art.

      Sketch then moved to a different house in Ponyville and would converse with Digg about art when College was done for the day. Being an artist himself, Digg also taught Sketch more ways of drawing and how to provide accurate depictions of things he saw.
      After graduating College, Digg retired from Proffessor and decided to give Sketch an Archeaologist job. With is love of exploring, Sketch was sure to get every detail and with his love of drawing, he could draw pictures of what he saw to provide information on Archeaological sites. The next week, Sketch was recruited.

      Sketch was to write detailed logs about findings and adventures and to list them with sketches to file with the Findings Archive. A day later,Sketch was assigned his first research assignment.
      To uncover the Dark Secrets of Temple Kuta'Mot.{Future Fanfic(With the Archival Sketches)}



      OTHER:Major Characters(My Property)- Sketch Quillwing,Berry Fritter,Digg.
      Minor Characters(My Property)-Mr.Leadhoof,Mrs.Inkmane
      Last edited by The Fantastical Sketchi; 12-19-2012 at 02:43 PM.

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      Hey there, Sketch!

      It looks like you missed the sticky on the required OC format. Check that out here: http://www.equestriaforever.com/show...ewfull=1#post4

      From what I can understand, it appears that what you have could work... we just need a lot more detail! Please edit back, giving some more insight into Sketch, and using our required OC submission format.
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      Quote Originally Posted by Twilight Sparkle View Post
      Hey there, Sketch!

      It looks like you missed the sticky on the required OC format. Check that out here: http://www.equestriaforever.com/show...ewfull=1#post4

      From what I can understand, it appears that what you have could work... we just need a lot more detail! Please edit back, giving some more insight into Sketch, and using our required OC submission format.
      Alright,going to revise now.Thanks for the advice Twilight.
      EDIT=Revisal in finished stage.
      EDIT 2:Revisal in early stages.
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      Alright, thanks for using the format.

      For starters, you'll need to ask permission to have all the canon relations you mention from those RPers. Seeing as they truly add nothing to the backstory, I would advise you to simply drop them.

      Bearing in mind the canon of our RP, it seems as if your story, mainly composed around the death of your OC's idol, is a bit off. Understandably, old age is not a grim death, however, the explicit mention of ponies dying is generally frowned upon. In your background, you seem to hop forward in large lapses, stating that things happened between those periods of time. To assist you in adding more detail, a better approach to take would be that of building up to the events through experiences you can tell us about. It's like writing a story... exactly what you'd be doing in RP! Additionally, you'll need to add a story describing the tale of how and when he earned his cutie mark.

      Try taking a look at some accepted submissions to gain an understanding on the level of detail we're looking for here. They can be found in the Character Submissions forum... accepted OC threads are marked with a thumbs-up.
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      Hmm, much better! The story looks decent.

      I do have to raise into suspicion his "quill-feathers" now. Earlier, I had been seeing them as simply normal feathers, however here you make explicit mention of the fact that they are designed to be different, even going as far to say he is part bird. I recall someone stating in the shoutbox last night some good advice... OC's are unique because of their personality and traits, not because of their physical appearance. It's quite true, for being a hybrid species doesn't make much sense.

      The only other thing which needs to be noted is the lack of marine life we've ever seen in Ponyville. According to the official map of Equestria, there is an ocean-esque body of water, however, Ponyville is quite far from it. Just something to think about.
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      Quote Originally Posted by Twilight Sparkle View Post
      Hmm, much better! The story looks decent.

      I do have to raise into suspicion his "quill-feathers" now. Earlier, I had been seeing them as simply normal feathers, however here you make explicit mention of the fact that they are designed to be different, even going as far to say he is part bird. I recall someone stating in the shoutbox last night some good advice... OC's are unique because of their personality and traits, not because of their physical appearance. It's quite true, for being a hybrid species doesn't make much sense.

      The only other thing which needs to be noted is the lack of marine life we've ever seen in Ponyville. According to the official map of Equestria, there is an ocean-esque body of water, however, Ponyville is quite far from it. Just something to think about.
      Thanks,Ill be getting on the later tofay.

      Revised it a bit.Hope this can work now.
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      Quote Originally Posted by Twilight Sparkle View Post
      I do have to raise into suspicion his "quill-feathers" now. Earlier, I had been seeing them as simply normal feathers, however here you make explicit mention of the fact that they are designed to be different...OC's are unique because of their personality and traits, not because of their physical appearance.
      Re-check that tiny segment, and you should be good to go!
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      Quote Originally Posted by Sketch Brony View Post
      Sketch had uniuqe Quill-Feathers.
      Third time's the charm on removing these?

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      Third time's the charm on removing these?
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